Jennifer Yarnell: August 27 Your sub-point concepts are solid potential, especially paragraph 4 and the character tropes concept is great; narrow and refine wording/unique considerations re: King for the literary devices you want to analyze.

I am attaching the Rough Draft of this essay. Here are the comments from the teacher that need to be fixed.
Jennifer Yarnell: August 27 Your sub-point concepts are solid potential, especially paragraph 4 and the character tropes concept is great; narrow and refine wording/unique considerations re: King for the literary devices you want to analyze. A refined and organized thesis is needed to parallel topic sentence sub-points. Paragraph II needs a precise, analytical topic sentence. Review and edit for convention errors. Review and edit for citation/works cited errors.

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