Overall, your letter was good, but you didn’t identify who you thought was Aarstol’s intended audience and you missed a couple of the main reasons why Aarstol argues for a five-hour workday

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Overall, your letter was good, but you didn’t identify who you thought was Aarstol’s intended audience and you missed a couple of the main reasons why Aarstol argues for a five-hour workday, including how women could benefit from it and how it could be used as an incentive for hiring talented employees and retaining them.

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